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Old 03-23-2013, 04:40 AM   #1
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( Bitch I'ma Mutha ****in Martian,)

Verse 1:
You didn't believe i would be back?
You know for that thought you deserved to be smacked
Having you planking on the Floor with ya Dome Cracked
Rip ya heart out ya chest now ya need a transplant
You try to be cute with ya Rhymes like it's a Fairyland
I'll come to you Rip you straight outta ya dream-Land
No I ain't kidding man, I'm ya worst nightmare
I'm dirty with my punchlines cuz i don't fight fair
go ahead cry see if i Care,Because you an me we don't compare
I'll uppercut you to the sky then crush you in mid Air
There are more of my kind lined up everywhere
Just thought i would inform you so your aware
So when you run your mouth please beware
Cuz We Will Catch you like a Spider's snare
Have you caught an completely ......unaware

[Hook]
Bitch I'm a mutha****in Martian (I'm a goddamn Goblin)x3
We are not the same, I am a Martian

Verse 2:
I'm Lyrically Insane Puffing O's like DopeFiends
Murdering these N****s They Gone Need more then Morphine
If You Battle Me, Cuz I'll Rip YA Flesh
Strip you of ya Dignity Even at your Best
Oh these dudes think they tough with that S on they Chest
Have ya Blood On tha Floor...damn It such a Mess
Verses so Evil N****s swear I'ma Possessed
Punchlines So vicous an cruel I know I'm a Goblin
Stepping to me you know it's Hoppin
Need someone to clean ya blood up Grab tha Mop man
I'ma beast Once I rip ya chest open, I'ma above you Snarlin
So many fake kids battling testing my Patience
I'm tha real deal on this board no need for imitations
your average I'm godlike because i push Limitations
I'm a Legendary Creature That Forgot his Past
Terrorizing N****s with a mutha****in Goblin Mask


Written by Myself aka Tremain
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Old 03-23-2013, 10:53 AM   #2
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I reread it 3 times just to try n get the flow of it. I like the hook too. Overall nicely done.
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Old 03-24-2013, 01:25 AM   #3
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Default Re: The Game - Martians Vs Goblins ( Freestyle )

Its the "Games" flow literally from Martians vs. Goblins.

But yeah you're pretty raw at this point. You're still an amateur given the lyrics. But if you keep working at it and delve yourself into studying your craft and abilities you'll probably become better. As much as "battle-rap" sounds cool. Its stupid and pretty much for the playgrounds or for the streets. start aiming for content rather than flash and quick hitters.

I myself was in your same position 4-5 years ago rapping on here with weak rhymes. But if you're consistent and really want to build. Research, research, and research; and also look within yourself and find meaningful rhymes. Also keep writing/rapping.... You'll eventually improve with time.
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The-Game is actually one of my fav rap artists. When I listen to real aggressive stuff Hes mostly who i listen to. An Yeah I'm looking to dedicate myself to this.
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